Arutelu:Rubiinšokolaad

I would try to change the font in first paragraph and add a title for photo.

Kommentaar

Sisus on mitmeid järjestikuseid sõnakordusi. Paar vormistusviga vajaks parandamist AndresEichenbaum (arutelu) 16. detsember 2021, kell 11:09 (EET)

Overall

Maybe add more refrences and the wording could be better :) JKsk12 (arutelu) 16. detsember 2021, kell 11:10 (EET)

Arutelu

It would be good if the begining had started the same look as the rest of the topic is. Lumehelves (arutelu) 16. detsember 2021, kell 11:17 (EET)

Comment

The introduction should be the first paragraph.